They say that there is good and evil in everyones heart
With me theres more
It feels like inside my mind is a neverending war
Some are good
Others are evil
Yet some who just want to fight
This mental war is killing me slowly
Please let it end tonight
Day after day my head is pounding
I no longer care who wins
I don't care if its my good or happiness
Or even my worst of sins
This war may only end when I do
I feel this day is near
Suicide is for the weak
So I'll die very naturally
By a war inside my mind
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I think this really well written. You get the point across clearly without losing any sort creative sense. Nice work :)
WOW I love it. This poem embodies what I ave been feeling for several years. I refuse to take my life but somehow I find enough strength to move forward. I love it!
haha i guess im weak. Tried suicide once but no luck. God didnt want me to go so easily. But nice poem though ^.^ -Ellie
'Suicide is for the weak', ; it is heroic to struggle, to fight until death comes naturally.
Hi Kevin, it's nice to read your poem. It's natural, and you could arrange such common things in a lovely way! Nice...
You actually remind me of myself. I too write a lot of angst, its a great relief to get it out on pen. My way of therapy too. I now try and write happy thoughts but its something I can't relate to as much. Your a good poet keep it up, and keep your pen closer than your enemies.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow that is a very strong and moving poem. i think in one way or another weve all been there. nive writing