(((Forest Bedroom))) Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

(((Forest Bedroom)))

Rating: 4.9


Secure in your heated arms...
Protected from Falls plantiff chill...
Aglow in the pleasure of your face--
Flushed as the burnished leaves upon Autumns hill;

Our bed is of russet and gold--
Natures humble crinkled spread---
Encompassed by semi-balding trees...
Autumns euphoria fills my head;

The winds brisk as in this bliss i feel with you...
The colours of our love-bonfire glow...
Safe and ecstatic in Falls loving embrace...
Two hearts beat dancing-in sweet love-they grow;


September 29,2010

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jim Cunningham 29 September 2010

this is well done-effective wording, imagery, good symmetry and a surprising last line-yes, well done

1 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success