The Universe (An Acrostic) Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

The Universe (An Acrostic)

Rating: 3.3


~Sun~

Super bright
Ultra light
Never night

~Moon~

Mostly seen
On days in between
Only the new
And not often blue

~Stars~

Shining in the sky
Twinkling bright in my eye
Always glowing like a Firefly
Radiating splendour from high
Shining sparkles never die

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 24 March 2015

I am a fan of the sun, moon, stars, and Theo Onken

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Thank YOU Kelly! ! ! 20 September 2021

Thank YOU Kelly! ! ! ! !

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Dawn Fuzan 15 May 2014

Nicely done theo

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Theodora Onken 13 April 2007

...and again I bid you a heartfelt Thank You! So glad you enjoyed it. Love Acrostics. Theo

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Universe 03 December 2021

Univers

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Monica Chung 19 March 2020

Theo, what do you mean by " mostly seen one day in between" Do you mean the moon mostl come out at night?

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Butch Decatoria 23 November 2018

I love acrostics too! Lol. These are good ones. Kudos.

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Guy Man Thing 19 April 2018

Moon is not spelt Mooa

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Pamela Sinicrope 10 May 2016

This is a well done acrostic. When I finished reading I had a great sense of your expression, but lost the acrostic. I thought to myself...Where's the letters...they seamlessly wove themselves into your writing. Really well done and I enjoyed this...Thanks.

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