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Theodora (Theo) Onken

Washington State
Thursday, April 12, 2007

The Universe (An Acrostic)

Rating: 3.3
~Sun~

Super bright
Ultra light
Never night

~Moon~

Mostly seen
On days in between
Only the new
And not often blue

~Stars~

Shining in the sky
Twinkling bright in my eye
Always glowing like a Firefly
Radiating splendour from high
Shining sparkles never die
Theodora (Theo) Onken
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COMMENTS
Monica Chung 19 March 2020
Theo, what do you mean by " mostly seen one day in between" Do you mean the moon mostl come out at night?
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Butch Decatoria 23 November 2018
I love acrostics too! Lol. These are good ones. Kudos.
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Guy Man Thing 19 April 2018
Moon is not spelt Mooa
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Pamela Sinicrope 10 May 2016
This is a well done acrostic. When I finished reading I had a great sense of your expression, but lost the acrostic. I thought to myself...Where's the letters...they seamlessly wove themselves into your writing. Really well done and I enjoyed this...Thanks.
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Kelly Kurt 24 March 2015
I am a fan of the sun, moon, stars, and Theo Onken
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Dawn Fuzan 15 May 2014
Nicely done theo
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Theodora Onken 13 April 2007
...and again I bid you a heartfelt Thank You! So glad you enjoyed it. Love Acrostics. Theo
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