Theodora (Theo) Onken

Gold Star - 25,323 Points (Washington State)

The Universe (An Acrostic) - Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

~Sun~

Super bright
Ultra light
Never night

~Moon~

Mostly seen
On days in between
Only the new
And not often blue

~Stars~

Shining in the sky
Twinkling bright in my eye
Always glowing like a Firefly
Radiating splendour from high
Shining sparkles never die


Comments about The Universe (An Acrostic) by Theodora (Theo) Onken

  • Butch Decatoria (11/23/2018 12:53:00 AM)

    I love acrostics too! Lol. These are good ones. Kudos. (Report)Reply

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  • (4/19/2018 10:12:00 AM)

    Moon is not spelt Mooa (Report)Reply

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  • Pamela Sinicrope (5/10/2016 3:54:00 PM)

    This is a well done acrostic. When I finished reading I had a great sense of your expression, but lost the acrostic. I thought to myself...Where's the letters...they seamlessly wove themselves into your writing. Really well done and I enjoyed this...Thanks. (Report)Reply

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  • Kelly Kurt (3/24/2015 10:32:00 PM)

    I am a fan of the sun, moon, stars, and Theo Onken (Report)Reply

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  • Dawn Fuzan (5/15/2014 12:34:00 PM)

    Nicely done theo (Report)Reply

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  • (4/13/2007 2:32:00 AM)

    ...and again I bid you a heartfelt Thank You!
    So glad you enjoyed it. Love Acrostics.
    Theo
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 12, 2007

Poem Edited: Monday, February 14, 2011


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