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Theodora (Theo) Onken

Washington State
Monday, August 20, 2007

Your Golden Pen

Rating: 3.6
Entangled in the depth of your blue eyes
...Entranced and in total bliss...
Embraced by your circled arms tight grasp
...Energized by your heavenly kiss...

We two are as a gift package
...Gift papered and tied with silk bow...
A grand presentation of sheer quality
...Of the sweet you that i have come to know...

...And in the background, playing...
...An Aussie Minstral and his music men...
Continue this moods amazing altruisms
...With a: 'Giving Melody'-written with your...
Golden Pen!
Theodora (Theo) Onken
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COMMENTS
Mason Maestro 01 January 2018
Hello Theo! Long time we haven't communicated. Being on this site since 2005, I noticed you are the only friend connection I have on here. Not sure why. Wow I can't believe you have over 900 poems on here! I will be sure to read more of your poetry. Let's keep in touch! Mason Maestro
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Tom Allport 25 July 2017
a wonderfully written poem of life's true gift that of finding true love? .............well penned T.
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Theodora Onken 06 May 2016
Pamela, thank you so much for your awesome, enlightening review. You are so very appreciated by me.
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Pamela Sinicrope 06 May 2016
I love the metaphor of a loving couple being a gift wrapped package! That is so true. Receiving such love is a true gift. Lucky couple. Personally, I love poems that use Verbs...I think it energizes the writing and engages the reader. I felt the love encircling me. Romantic, with the music in the background.....love music that was crafted with the lover's golden pen. A bit schmaltzy in the best romantic way...loved it!
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Susan Williams 02 May 2016
Oh! I didn't see this until after I read it and scrolled up to reread. That is why those introductory lines are as smooth as silk, soft as a breeze, and set the stage for romance. The four all start with words beginning with the letter E, words that sound like a moment in love....that entangled and entranced, embraced and energized. Such a subtle way to get the reader in the mood for dancing away in a romantic haze! Clever girl! The entire poem is a yummy in our starry hearts! As Melvina says- -a serving of literary delight!
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Dr Antony Theodore 20 April 2016
Entangled in the depth of your blue eyes ...Entranced and in total bliss... Embraced by your circled arms tight grasp ...Energized by your heavenly kiss... very fine introductory lines. for your poem. this is a very nice poem. thank you dear poetess. tony
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Edward Kofi Louis 20 December 2015
Of true love that i've come to know. Nice work.
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Melvina Germain 16 October 2015
An amazing serving of literary delight, just as I remembered your work to be Theo.....
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Tushar Ray 24 March 2015
Excellent poetic expression of emotion, affection and love! Very enjoyable!
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Ramesh Rai 11 August 2014
Written with your golden pen. Entangled in the depth of your blue eyes ...Entranced and in total bliss... Embraced by your circled arms tight grasp ...Energized by your heavenly kiss....Perfectly soothing and enchanting.
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