Your Golden Pen Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

L, A, M, P, And M, Thank you all so very very much! Theo

Excellent poetic expression of emotion, affection and love! Very enjoyable!

Patricia, thank you so ver much for your very kind words. Many blessings to you. Theo

Written with your golden pen. Entangled in the depth of your blue eyes ...Entranced and in total bliss... Embraced by your circled arms tight grasp ...Energized by your heavenly kiss....Perfectly soothing and enchanting.

It's been a while since I've observed your style with such magificent classiness... Ms Theo, you drive me wild!

Hello Theo! Long time we haven't communicated. Being on this site since 2005, I noticed you are the only friend connection I have on here. Not sure why. Wow I can't believe you have over 900 poems on here! I will be sure to read more of your poetry. Let's keep in touch! Mason Maestro

a wonderfully written poem of life's true gift that of finding true love? .............well penned T.

Pamela, thank you so much for your awesome, enlightening review. You are so very appreciated by me.

I love the metaphor of a loving couple being a gift wrapped package! That is so true. Receiving such love is a true gift. Lucky couple. Personally, I love poems that use Verbs...I think it energizes the writing and engages the reader. I felt the love encircling me. Romantic, with the music in the background.....love music that was crafted with the lover's golden pen. A bit schmaltzy in the best romantic way...loved it!

Oh! I didn't see this until after I read it and scrolled up to reread. That is why those introductory lines are as smooth as silk, soft as a breeze, and set the stage for romance. The four all start with words beginning with the letter E, words that sound like a moment in love....that entangled and entranced, embraced and energized. Such a subtle way to get the reader in the mood for dancing away in a romantic haze! Clever girl! The entire poem is a yummy in our starry hearts! As Melvina says- -a serving of literary delight!