Rene' Bennett

Rookie - 10 Points (Los Angelos, California)

Forget Me Not

Poem by Rene' Bennett

I cried a tear
or two today
while I packed
your things away.
I carefully placed
each piece in a box
as not to break
forget me nots.
Pictures we took
memories we made
side by side
together they laid.
I stood there
for a minute or two
gently whispered
'I love you.'
Then I placed the lid
on the box
as I promised
to forget you not.

Comments about Forget Me Not by Rene' Bennett

  • Adryan Barnathan (7/30/2005 6:47:00 PM)

    Rene' these words run deep into the vein of love and loss thru death....! UR heart can be felt in every word...just keep writing, your talent is inspiring~!(Report)Reply

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  • Linda Preston (7/23/2005 11:46:00 AM)

    This is a very powerful emotional poem. Well done, Rene :)(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 21, 2005

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