Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 481,137 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Forgiven For - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

I feel let down
By things unknown
It pinches me from inside
With anguish and pain very wide

I decided to end
Precious life before friends
Or sometimes decided to disclose
Before priest and promise

I had blundered
And blindly surrendered
Now he was backing out
And I had nothing to speak about

He took it as easy ride
I had soul inside
Taking shape of human being
It was all about misery to bring

I bowed down
With many tears flown
On earth to make it pure
I was forgiven for sure

For my part I stood
And understood
Never hesitate to reveal
If your conscious really feel

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Comments about Forgiven For by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • (3/9/2015 12:30:00 PM)


    The inner conscious can reveal a lot to us, A great poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/9/2015 11:34:00 AM)


    I feel let down
    By things unknown
    (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 9, 2015



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