Tuesday, March 24, 2009

Forgiveness Comments

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Forgiveness, I cut it into my skin and paint it black,
The cut stings and brings tears to my eyes
The pain feels good,
So I keep going
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Sandra Martyres 25 March 2009

Terri, this poem definitely conveys a deep sense of pain and remorse. Well written, but I too believe that we have to dust ourselves out and start living again...Take care

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Rhonda Moody 24 March 2009

That is so sad. I hope you do not dwell in your pain forever. You must move on and be strong. Do not blame yourself. You do not control others. Rhonda

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Terri Brown

Terri Brown

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