Forgiveness Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Forgiveness

Rating: 4.9


What is considered most important aspect?
To lead honorable but ordinary life with respect
At any point of given time you should be able to inspect
The self assessment device which guides you to act

This is not the commodity which is easily available
Emanation of pure thoughts reflect and are readable
This is what you give to others and expect in return
Same treatment, but if not, then no hostile turn

This is how one adapts and decides to move
May be it not possible then one has to undergo trauma and prove
Not all the times, points may be understood and realized
In the long run, its credibility is not on vane and materialized

You may have unkind reception with insult
So much pain at heart with no fruitful result
Don’t fail in your attempts to search and consult
Try to swallow the bitter pill but not find the fault

If you survive at this critical moment
Half battle is won with glorious event
Rival may think with sudden thought provoking
Accept your point or regret with little invoking

Hostile reaction in mind to the treatment meted
Scuffle resulting on the words commented
Emitting poison with deliberate intention
Leaves little room for reconciliation and prevention

Forgiveness has become joke of the day
It is considered to be weapon Found in the
The weak may opt and go for its implementation
the powerful may term it as tool for augmentation

The powerful army has failed to achieve it by confrontation
They have suffered the fate in turn or rotation
Nothing can be extracted from unwilling soul
You may detest and always smell foul

How do we act when emerge as victorious?
Do we look noble and reasonable or look furious?
All these has got greater bearing in long run
Things are sorted out with reason and not with fun

It has got its relevance even today
It can prove powerful weapon of the day
We must be reasonable and politely say
What is ultimate solution to find the way?

very action has got action and equal reaction
Not necessarily every action has to be responded with action
If one breaks the chain and offers silence
Result may be fantastic with resilience……………

Incidences of small nature must be forgotten
Even ill will act also be given go bye and forgiven
this is considered best available means and always sought
Desirous result can be achieved and peace also brought

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulochna Pandit 05 September 2009

You may have unkind reception and insult So much pain at heart with no fruitful result

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Vijay Suwarnkar 05 September 2009

You may have unkind reception and insult So much pain at heart with no fruitful result...10

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Severina Dsouza 05 September 2009

This is how one adapts and decides to move May be possible one has to undergo trauma and prove

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Kamlesh Ambalal 05 September 2009

you survive at this critical moment Half battle is won with glorious event......10

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Bharati Bhikhubhai 05 September 2009

This is how one adapts and decides to move May be possible one has to undergo trauma and prove.10

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Lady Grace 07 September 2009

precisely right...peace is a result of forgiving..this is nicely done dear.

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this reads like it was written when language meant something and people were wise...

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Trevor William 05 September 2009

If you survive at this critical moment Half battle is won with glorious event

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Pradip Pillai 05 September 2009

Incidences of small nature must be forgotten Even ill will act also be given go bye and forgiven

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Bhanubhai Montu Shah 05 September 2009

So much pain at heart with no fruitful result Don’t fail in your attempts to search the soul and consult

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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