Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 802,882 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Forgiveness - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

What is considered most important aspect?
To lead honorable but ordinary life with respect
At any point of given time you should be able to inspect
The self assessment device which guides you to act

This is not the commodity which is easily available
Emanation of pure thoughts reflect and are readable
This is what you give to others and expect in return
Same treatment, but if not, then no hostile turn

This is how one adapts and decides to move
May be it not possible then one has to undergo trauma and prove
Not all the times, points may be understood and realized
In the long run, its credibility is not on vane and materialized

You may have unkind reception with insult
So much pain at heart with no fruitful result
Don’t fail in your attempts to search and consult
Try to swallow the bitter pill but not find the fault

If you survive at this critical moment
Half battle is won with glorious event
Rival may think with sudden thought provoking
Accept your point or regret with little invoking

Hostile reaction in mind to the treatment meted
Scuffle resulting on the words commented
Emitting poison with deliberate intention
Leaves little room for reconciliation and prevention

Forgiveness has become joke of the day
It is considered to be weapon Found in the
The weak may opt and go for its implementation
the powerful may term it as tool for augmentation

The powerful army has failed to achieve it by confrontation
They have suffered the fate in turn or rotation
Nothing can be extracted from unwilling soul
You may detest and always smell foul

How do we act when emerge as victorious?
Do we look noble and reasonable or look furious?
All these has got greater bearing in long run
Things are sorted out with reason and not with fun

It has got its relevance even today
It can prove powerful weapon of the day
We must be reasonable and politely say
What is ultimate solution to find the way?

very action has got action and equal reaction
Not necessarily every action has to be responded with action
If one breaks the chain and offers silence
Result may be fantastic with resilience……………

Incidences of small nature must be forgotten
Even ill will act also be given go bye and forgiven
this is considered best available means and always sought
Desirous result can be achieved and peace also brought


Comments about Forgiveness by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Lady Grace (9/7/2009 5:44:00 AM)

    precisely right...peace is a result of forgiving..this is nicely done dear. (Report)Reply

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  • Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (9/6/2009 9:04:00 PM)

    this reads like it was written when language meant something and people were wise... (Report)Reply

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  • Trevor William (9/5/2009 9:49:00 PM)

    If you survive at this critical moment
    Half battle is won with glorious event
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  • Pradip Pillai (9/5/2009 9:43:00 PM)

    Incidences of small nature must be forgotten
    Even ill will act also be given go bye and forgiven
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  • Bhanubhai Montu Shah (9/5/2009 9:39:00 PM)

    So much pain at heart with no fruitful result
    Don’t fail in your attempts to search the soul and consult
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  • Mahananda Pittle Jaswantlal (9/5/2009 9:34:00 PM)

    Not all the time point may be understood and realized
    In the long run its credibility is not on vane and materialized
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  • Chand Shikari (9/5/2009 9:24:00 PM)

    What is considered most important aspect?
    To lead honourable and ordinary life with respect
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  • Ritul Soni (9/5/2009 9:19:00 PM)

    To lead honourable and ordinary life with respect
    At any point of given time you should be able to inspect
    The self assessment device which guides you to act
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  • Pittle Shaileja (9/5/2009 9:13:00 PM)

    You may have unkind reception and insult
    So much pain at heart with no fruitful result
    You may have unkind reception and insult
    So much pain at heart with no fruitful result
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  • Sejal Kapadia (9/5/2009 9:10:00 PM)

    Not all the time point may be understood and realized
    In the long run its credibility is not on vane and materialized
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  • Bharati Bhikhubhai (9/5/2009 9:06:00 PM)

    This is how one adapts and decides to move
    May be possible one has to undergo trauma and prove.10
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  • Kamlesh Ambalal (9/5/2009 9:01:00 PM)

    you survive at this critical moment
    Half battle is won with glorious event......10
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  • Severina Dsouza (9/5/2009 10:52:00 AM)

    This is how one adapts and decides to move
    May be possible one has to undergo trauma and prove
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  • Vijay Suwarnkar (9/5/2009 10:41:00 AM)

    You may have unkind reception and insult
    So much pain at heart with no fruitful result...10
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  • Sulochna Pandit (9/5/2009 10:37:00 AM)

    You may have unkind reception and insult
    So much pain at heart with no fruitful result
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  • Maulin Shah (9/5/2009 10:27:00 AM)

    Hostile reaction to the treatment meted
    Scuffle resulting on the words commented
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  • Dalsukh S (9/5/2009 10:20:00 AM)

    If you survive at this critical moment
    Half battle is won with glorious event....10
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  • Vinod Karmakar (9/5/2009 10:17:00 AM)

    The self assessment device which guides you to act (Report)Reply

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  • Jayant Manik (9/5/2009 10:13:00 AM)

    you survive at this critical moment
    Half battle is won with glorious event
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  • Argum Sheth (9/5/2009 10:06:00 AM)

    This is what you give to others and expect in return
    Same treatment, but if not, then no hostile turn
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 2, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 14, 2011


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