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Form Heaven To Hell - Poem by POOJA LADYLUCK

Wet eyes and dry lips
His death is sucking up life in sips
His smile's stolen, 'ecstasy'? ? , he has never known
He had crumbled his fate, while he had grown
But till today he lives to tell

One wrong step, and you are trapped in this hell
Unaware of, when you fell...........

Comments about Form Heaven To Hell by POOJA LADYLUCK

  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (4/2/2008 7:07:00 AM)

    from saturn to venus.....alighting at earth..........swallowed by the purple holes.......i see heaven..but so near to hell...why is that? (Report) Reply

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  • (3/28/2008 12:57:00 AM)

    you have probed inside this emotion very well
    His death is sucking up life in sips........this line is classic...good job
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 27, 2008

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