Formula One Race Poem by Vijay Sai R

Formula One Race



Hectic battle
A flock of
Little more than twenty
Sliding so swiftly
Racing each other
Moving over
Slender wires
Bending all over
Intense fight
Quest of
Who wins first
A matter of pride
Collecting foods
In between ways too
Only to
Rejoin so soon
And back to business
Final destination
Heading to their colonies
Settling in it finally
Keeping them busy
All the time
Never withdrawing
Their efforts
Neither complaining
About their path
Whatever it may be
Crests or troughs
Doesn't matter
Little ants
Teaching us
Time and again
When you rest
You rust!

Saturday, February 17, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: social behaviour
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prayad Brian Pantasri 12 June 2018

Indeed, little ants teaching us all with so many things. It's one of inspired poem Vijay. Thank you for sharing.

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Rajnish Manga 06 March 2018

An inspiring poem reflecting age old wisdom. Thanks for sharing.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 February 2018

LAST PART: because of the many many cars which are driving as the rapidest (most rapid) on that racing circuit. Indeed a hectic battle, but there is order in this hectic smogged area. Thank you for sharing this very impressive poem, this is the first poem I have read about the Formula One. A 10 and myriads more for the vote!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 February 2018

Based upon your two last lines I will add: Yes, keep on moving, Sir! It is obviously know that IF we rest too long, we are rusting, true fact! This is a brilliant poem about car racing of the Formula One, but what I miss as descriprions here are How smoggy and foggy all become,

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Vijay Sai R

Vijay Sai R

Trichy, South India
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