Eternal Bird Poem by Vijay Sai R

Eternal Bird

Rating: 4.2

Every evening
When the sun is setting deep
When the cloud is turning from
Bizarre blue to orange red
When the clock is showing half past five
Its time I waited for my pet
In my garden and near my water filled well
It came as I expected
Flying over here from nowhere
Sitting on my well
Shouting mildly for its regular food
I threw a couple of biscuits
Being old and not able to swallow
It blinked here and there
Then, as water came from the ditch
It soaked its food until it is well done
And fit enough for consumption
Satisfied, it looked here and there again
Wings flirting, it started to fly
Towards nowhere from here, from my home!
Guess my pet? It’s none other than my eternal crow!

Persian Khushi 06 October 2012

beautifully composed and flow of words

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Susanta Pattnayak 06 October 2012

Though the 'eternal' thing a little bit mysterious it was a good read. Keep writing.. and thank you for the invitation.

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Hazel Durham 06 October 2012

You tell a tale so well, very original, great write!

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Sallam Yassin 06 October 2012

nice flying bird who came from nowhere this poetry personal is quit unique and fine well done my friend god bless u

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Peyton Webb 06 October 2012

It very good I loved the imagery.

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Aniruddha Pathak 22 May 2019

We all look at things. A poet sees, observes, and assimilates. And then write a poem like this. Crows are very intelligent among birds. It comes out well in this poem. Lovely depiction.

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Sudipta Bhattacharyya 05 January 2016

Wonderful simplicity & lucidity found in your composition. Thanks a lot for sharing such a beautiful poem. Sudipta Bhattacharyya.

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Walterrean Salley 10 September 2014

Keen observations. Love how you've held your train of thought, safely guiding the reader at every turn. Nicely done.

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Charles M Moore 18 December 2012

curious interpretation of some words, Interesting read, enjoyed.

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Kathrin P. 07 October 2012

you have touched my heart :) very beautiful poem

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Vijay Sai R

Vijay Sai R

Trichy, South India
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