Eternal Bird Poem by Vijay Sai R

Towards nowhere from here, from my home! Guess my pet? It’s none other than my eternal crow! what do u mean by eternal crow......... it is mysterious. You are trying to give expression to something in u or your desire or secret passion.. tell me wht is this eternal crow

I was drawn to keep reading to find the missing clue in figuring out the meaning of this and I found it in the end. Good poem

A lovely picture in my mind, thank you Vijay

Interesting and fantastic...I like this poem. Nilufer Dursun

Interesting poem Vijay. I like the oxymoron 'shouting mildly'

We all look at things. A poet sees, observes, and assimilates. And then write a poem like this. Crows are very intelligent among birds. It comes out well in this poem. Lovely depiction.

Wonderful simplicity & lucidity found in your composition. Thanks a lot for sharing such a beautiful poem. Sudipta Bhattacharyya.

Keen observations. Love how you've held your train of thought, safely guiding the reader at every turn. Nicely done.

curious interpretation of some words, Interesting read, enjoyed.

you have touched my heart :) very beautiful poem