Another day
Another disappointment
Haplessly dethroned
Helplessly ignored
Teased and tormented
Not a point to prove
I accepted the cause
For no fault of mine
And moved on
Reminding myself repeatedly
This moment is never permanent in life
Shattered and tarnished
I tread along the wayside
Yelling aloud! Is there anyone who could hear me?
Twin eyes soon drenched in swimming pool
Just then, little droplets
Pouring into divine showers
Wiped away all my tears
I thanked my heavenly friend
Feeling fresh and rejuvenated
I got up
Saying to myself
There’s always another chance!
To prove
The hunter too can become the hunted!
I got up saying to myself there's always another chance......So True n so inspirational....Wonderful poetic diction.10+
there is no life without hope and there is no hope without life... ups and downs that's life... when you're in a tunnel surely you will glance a ray this is the HOPE, he asks for you to run and run and run until you reach the SUN... your DIVINE SHOWERS is well expressed!
This poem was just brillant i loved it, it was wonderful keep up the good work :)
Words usage is elegant! ! ! But the ending stanzacould have been made more clear..10 + for your poetic aptitude! !
Desperate quest for success is finally met and it is the beauty of this write!
Beautiful poem. When we keep our eyes wide open (probably brain) , opportunities are unlimited. It's like stars in sky, we have to scale, just, the Terrace to view. Wait for the cloud to remove veil, all disappointments will vanish. I write this, that all our expressions reflect our true inner feelings. I write every expressions literally. I take every expressions literally. Nice expressions.
Your poetry is wonderfully full and alive, you give strong and intense feelings and emotions, your visual wording is well done. This is a wonderful poem, very intense. thanks for sharing Michael
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is refreshing poetic rain that emerges out of the dark cloud of torment. I really like this poem.