Four Parts Poem by Alex Lane

Four Parts



The Soul
Wants to say but can't find the words

The Heart
Can express it but it's far too over-bearing

The Mind
Can verbalise it but won't

The Body
Can now only express ambivalence

Damn it.

Thursday, April 3, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Doris Cornago 03 April 2014

Very reflective. I hope that you can expand more the repertoire of your language and so make poetry unlock the image now only slightly peeping through the door. I like your attitude though - brief and uncaring. A lot of potential for more. Do write more. i will be looking.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success