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The pain runs freely through my veins
The scars left behind on my arms
It’s evidence of the pain
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Ben mcelfresh
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Effie Yalena Steyn 17 December 2007

I really admire this, so well written and full of emotion. It kept me breathless from beginning to end. WEll done Effie xx

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Fred Johnson 25 May 2007

i really like this poem i think it is my favorite actually...well one of my favorites!

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Anabel just Anabel 07 March 2007

love it! ! ! you are great! !

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poetry lover 05 March 2007

I liked it however, one is never free from their own pain.

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