Free Minds Poem by Caleb Gonzales

Free Minds



Free minds are closed minds
In a different perspective
Strangers or brothers
Yours or mine
Free minds
Strange minds in a strange world
With a twisted reality
Reminding us, of the dark days
Flashes of our old ways
The journey for a brighter Vision Hoping for a brighter journey
When your journey has all but ended... Close your mind and free your soul

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leah Ayliffe 08 July 2014

Fantastic! I love this one! Reminds me a little of The Doors Great choice of words: Free minds Strange minds in a strange world With a twisted reality Reminding us, of the dark days Flashes of our old ways Bravo!

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Susan Lacovara 05 May 2014

I have found the best way to deal with closed minds is to practice tolerance...possibly change their minds, through a peaceful positivity....wishful thinking, but I will continue to keep an open mind. Thanks for your thought provoking write. As always, PEACE.

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Brian Jani 04 May 2014

Free minds, what a fitting title for such a good poem.please checkout my poems caleb

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Caleb Gonzales

Caleb Gonzales

Bakersfield California
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