Caleb Gonzales

Rookie - 9 Points (05/13/1992-05/13/2092 / Bakersfield California)

'Forever More' - Poem by Caleb Gonzales

Far away
Or close by
Your not to far from my mind
I always try to see the world
The way you do
I'm just not as clear minded as you
Living in my own head
Making things make sense
In my own way
Being misunderstood
Forever more

Topic(s) of this poem: nonsense

Comments about 'Forever More' by Caleb Gonzales

  • Mihaela Pirjol (6/22/2014 7:18:00 AM)

    Being misunderstood sometimes is a sign of being unique, which is great. Beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Julia Yusupova (5/19/2014 8:48:00 AM)

    i can relate to this (Report) Reply

  • Caleb Gonzales (5/13/2014 4:26:00 PM)

    Thank you Mary I appreciate it :) (Report) Reply

  • Mary Rowena (5/13/2014 2:04:00 PM)

    Short and sweet. Been reading through your poems and they're very nice, keep it up :) (Report) Reply

  • Ruma Chaudhuri (5/6/2014 9:48:00 AM)

    Excellent one. I like your poems. You know, breaking heart can produce a lot of nice creations. So, sometimes it is better for poets and others who are in the world of any creative world. Ha ha ha. Don't mind. Your poems are short and cute. I like this. Ruma (Report) Reply

  • Susan Lacovara (5/5/2014 7:42:00 PM)

    I love the line...I always try to see the world the way you do.... within your write I sense your kindness and a longing to be heard. We hear you loud and clear! Keep posting! PEACE (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 4, 2014

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