Free To Go Poem by Eli Unknown

Free To Go



trying to escape the steel toe thoughts in my mind
leaving fear and anger behind
kinda like being blind
able to forgive
the moment for being so pale
for being quiet when i just want to yell
putting this in your hand
for show and tell
listen to my words describe billowy clouds formation above our heads
the breath of a small puppy
chocolate yummy
the air that we breathe is a concept to believe
convincing the moment into your mind from my eye
lets not sit and waste time on why
we will get by
those are the exact words he said to me
in his moments of drunke-ness
how ironic dontcha think
in the blink you want me to disappear
but in the same want you ask me to stay
it was no mistake
an overwhelming confusion
unable to stop the flow
of what you already know
how i am supposed to take it slow
when i am just free to go

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nikunj Sharma 23 June 2009

unable to stop the flow of what you already know how i am supposed to take it slow when i am just free to go truly said......... you have a great skillset..keep up the good work, read my poems as well, if u have time......... esp SMILES, written by me.. gud luck to you

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