Christopher Montalvo

Rookie - 0 Points (6/20/1992 / Brooklyn, NY)

Free Within My Dreams - Poem by Christopher Montalvo

Within my dreams,
I see the life that i've made,
So many messages and signs,
that have me running away.
So subliminal,
Yet so symbolic,
Dreams lead me to wonder why i haven't tried it.
These passions and fantasies,
leave me feeling so unsure of myself,
Yet so unique,
I wish the others felt as free as me.
Within my dreams, I am free.
No limits or boundaries,
Looking out at the horizon that shines so brightly,
No hesitations, only giving into actions,
which leads me to believe that I am complete.

Comments about Free Within My Dreams by Christopher Montalvo

  • Rhonda Moody (7/23/2009 8:33:00 PM)

    A 10 for this one, I loved it... (Report)Reply

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  • J Baker (2/27/2009 7:48:00 PM)

    A ten out of ten. Well done! ! Jemx (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 11, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 13, 2009

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