Sweet Rain Poem by Christopher Montalvo

Sweet Rain

Rating: 5.0


Inhale the cool wind of the dark night,
Soul soothing, Mind-relaxing,
Built up tension released in an instant.
Streetlights cast a deep pool,
Becoming one with the concrete below,
Peace and Quiet.
In one split moment,
Rain begins to ruthlessly pour,
Bursting through the sky above,
Streaks of blue diamonds brighten the heavens with glory,
Illuminating the earth's everlasting beauty.

As the rain falls,
Their lips become wet,
Moist with love and desire,
Craving the attention,
Needing the sentiment,
Missed the affection,
That only you could provide,
Lips will always be tender,
With you by my side.
One sweet and sultry kiss,
to make me wish,
The drought was over.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Surya . 01 July 2009

nice, deep and emotiona poem. nice words too voted10 surya

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Naidz Ladia 24 May 2009

nice, , , the drought was over becoz of sweet rain..a nice one ha..naizz

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Fiona Davidson 16 May 2009

Beautiful sensual writing Cristopher...10+++

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