Freedom Color Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Freedom Color

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Strongest survive
Others merely spend time and live
Life is just “merry and kill the time”
To live and carry on is the only aim

The cast formation was first blunder
India witnessed freedom color
It was to be home for poor and alike
Country had free breather to like

Cast has taken over driver’s seat
It has rooted deep its feet
Whole of country is divided on these lines
The goal and aim has been pushed to side lines

Today strongest face annihilation
If that is not tied with cast relation
Religion plays part but with difference
It has made not much interference

You find the disappearance of basic value
They are on extinction and very much due
Its elevation to some standard is must
Else time is not far when we may loose entire trust

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 December 2013

Strongest survive Others merely spend time and live

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Gajanan Mishra 29 December 2013

to live and carry one, good call, thanks sir. Please read my new poems.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 December 2013

Sundaram Krishnaswamy likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 December 2013

i love its meaning Luis Kindheart Perez21 minutes ago It makes sense with the struggles of life. This is what I base my poems off of. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 December 2013

always does hgreat work here Shawn Daniels22 minutes ago wonderful poem Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 December 2013

very good malenky malenky22 minutes ago i love it Comment +1 nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 December 2013

S.R Gibbs22 minutes ago nice

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