We were sitting on your rooftop
Staring at the skies
The sun was dipping lower
I looked into your eyes
You saw what I was feeling
I know you felt it too
We wanted time to just stand still
Then forever there'd be me and you
Why can't we freeze this moment?
Return to it in time
Stay together through the years
Proclaim I'm yours and you are mine
So let us freeze this moment
Store it safely away
Even if we leave this place
We'll return to it someday
To the world you may be one person,
but to one person you may be the world.
Awesome! Awesome! Awesome! I liked it very much! My vote is 10
Wonderful Vizard! You are indeed a wizard, playing magic with verse! But is it not too early 'to freeze the moment'?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow! This is just perfect with great rhythm and flow capturing the moments so beautifully and what a gem the last two lines are! ! Brilliant write! !