Portia Jacobs

! Friendship! - Poem by Portia Jacobs

It hurts me to say
that our friendship is trying
to go away, but i promise right
here today that i will make
this friendship stay. I love you
like a friend, like a sister and a
mother, but tell me why friendship
doesnt want to go no further. Please
dont leave me, please dont go, but
my promise to you is this friendship
will grow. Maybe not today maybe not
tomorrow but i cannot go on living
in this painful sorrow.

Comments about ! Friendship! by Portia Jacobs

  • (2/28/2007 6:09:00 PM)

    This is a very good poem. I think that you really state how you feel and that is good when you are writing poetry. (Report) Reply

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  • (2/10/2007 2:17:00 PM)

    pay no mind to those who hate......this poem is strong and appreciated by me and by others who enjoy good writing.....keep it up....you must go on!

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  • (1/24/2007 8:59:00 AM)

    nice poem, you really told how you felt.. (Report) Reply

  • (12/15/2006 1:29:00 AM)

    This poem sucks ass, but maybe you can justify it by explaining what the meaning behind it is or what drugs you took prior to writing this (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 28, 2006

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