Friendship Poem by Lone Corvus

Friendship



A stone step.

A touch.

A presence of someone watching.

A moment of bliss.

A step too far.

An intrusion of pain.

A tearing loss.

A return of loneliness, of cold cobwebs, of emptiness.

A regret.

A new set of armour, stronger, colder, safer..

Sunday, October 7, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: emptiness,friendship,loneliness,loss,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 08 November 2018

This is a good piece of writing- -you guided it from line to line with a talented hand on the reins- -very well done! !

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Chinedu Dike 26 October 2018

Well thought out and nicely crafted with conviction. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing Lone.

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Kim Barney 08 October 2018

An interesting poem. Your first and a good start. Welcome to Poem Hunter!

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