Wednesday, November 26, 2014

From 'A Severe Lack Of Holiday Spirit' Comments

Rating: 4.3

… People hit
the sauce in a big way all winter.
Amidst blizzards they wrestle
unsuccessfully with the dark comedy
...
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Susan Williams 18 January 2016

We could all learn from this that brevity can draw the best descriptive

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Rajnish Manga 17 January 2016

Incredibly wonderful. Poignant yet soulful. Thanks.

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Kim Barney 17 January 2016

Enjoyable poem. I especially like the lines the mercury just plummets, like a migrating duck blasted out of the sky by some hunter in a cap with fur earflaps.

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Manonton Dalan 17 January 2016

am still waiting for winter definition...am trolling along with fall

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M Asim Nehal 17 January 2016

Nice poem on winter. I liked it, thanks for sharing

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