Before open source
two slipped before lip met lip
through renewed life force.
Limitless promise
Then hibernation, tasteless,
limitless promise
Waiting, becoming,
from hibernation, tasteless,
wakes, ends numbing.
From an open source
two sip before lip meets lip
discover life force
Many dimensions
learn to create, and expand
with no dissentions
Shared intuitions
Encourage interfaces
Fusion and fission
Guidelines disappear,
unjustified pride down drain
drips with worry, fear.
New vistas appear
as both know both know both feel -
synergy sincere!
Eternity, once dear,
were those precious moments shared
horizons clear?
After open source
two slip before lip meets lip
apprehend life force.
12 July 2004 revised 1 September 2007 and 2 September 2008
for previous version entitled Open Source to Life Force to Open Source see below
Open Source to Life Force to Open Source
Before open source
two slipped before lip met lip
to renew life force.
Before true life force
two slipped before lip met lip
knew true open source.
Limitless promise.
Then hibernation, tasteless,
limitless promise....
Waiting, becoming,
from hibernation, tasteless,
wakes, ends numbing.
Through an open source
two sip before lip meets lip....
discover life force
Many dimensions
foster creation, expand
without dissentions
Shared intuitions
Encourage interfaces
Fusion and fission
Through an open source
two sip before lip meets lip....
uncover life force
Guidelines disappear,
Useless pride goes down the drain
with worry and fear.
New vistas appear
as both know both know both feel -
synergy sincere.
Eternity, now, here,
is this precious moment shared -
horizons clear.
Through an open source
two sip as lip meets lip,
recover life force
12 July 2004 revised 1 September 2007
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