From My Lips To Your Ears Poem by Madeline Fazio

From My Lips To Your Ears

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There are so mant thoughts inside my head
so many feelings,
There's almost no room for them to settle

Yet I find that trying to express those feelings
is quite a difficult task
For you see I should not be confessing to this paper

It should be from my lips to your ears

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adriana Cruz 03 October 2005

yes i must say i enjoyed it considerably myself.

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John Kay 24 September 2005

Madeline...this works like a poem should work, concluding big. My suggestion for improving it would be to put some of those thoughs, both real and made up, into the poem. Sometimes the made up thoughts are the best and make for the best poetry.

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