From Pilgrim To Wanderer Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

From Pilgrim To Wanderer

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It was Creator's fond dream,
Man be a pilgrim.
Alas, it turned grave and grim—
His earnest error,
For, man's just a wanderer.
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Senryu |10.09.2019|

Thursday, October 17, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: god
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Man is supposed to be at the pinnacle of evolution in his journey as pilgrim on a path that rises from strength to strength. What a pity if he turns a wanderer instead.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kingsley Egbukole 17 October 2019

Has man missed his course from pilgrim to wanderer? . Sad but true. Kingsley Egbukole

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Aniruddha Pathak 18 October 2019

You are right dear poet, from a pilgrim to wanderer.

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Kingsley Egbukole 17 October 2019

Man missed his course from pilgrim to wanderer. Sad but true. Kingsley Egbukole

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Kostas Lagos 17 October 2019

A masterpiece! To my list!

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Aniruddha Pathak 18 October 2019

I'm so glad you liked it so much, dear Kostas Lagos, to put it in yr My Poem List. Thank you.

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