From Silent Sadness To The River Poem by Vicky Iliaens

From Silent Sadness To The River

Rating: 5.0


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sadness in silent flowerchalises,
next to the loneliness of the riverbank

the sigh of tears,
the crying of drops,
that they may go to sleep.

falling,
without standing up again,
hidden and sleeping in closing flowerchalises,

to hold on
towhat might be be gone tomorrow

To be as two flowers,
gone forever, tomorrow into eternity.
gently taken on the small streams
Slowly passed to the river,
in which tears drown,
in which sorrow forms a confluency with the water,
so that its visibility disappears and water is made clear for every sunken flower.

Wednesday, September 6, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: deep,grieve,love and life,sad
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
should speak for itself, everyone has its own way to interprate a poem and some have the same view but that is not necissary
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 06 September 2017

Shy of tear carries drops of crying. Next to the loneliness of the riverbank such deep crying and flowing is perceived. Visibility disappears and water is made very clear. An interesting poem is shared here is amazing....10

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Vicky Iliaens 07 September 2017

ty much for such great words even altough I wrote something that in english language doesn't exist hihi: -) oops! Going to adapt it! ty

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