From The Start Love Gio Masserati Poem by Gio Masserati

From The Start Love Gio Masserati

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From the start
you touched my heart
metaphorically
cosmically
eternally
light of human kindness
saves me
dimness surrounded me
lone
smoldering wick
Reignite me
EXPLOSION
calmness
blinding truth
I breathe
I live
love supreme
be near with me
soul ties
wrapped around my heart
in lasso formations
tugging on my willingness
wild horses
fears untamed
you lead me
into blind waters
of trust
Breathe
I follow
Breathing
in unison
harmonious
breath of heaven
draw me close
all goes assunder
as I surrender
to a Destiny
I can't control
I am lost
where is this level
that unhinges me
vying
for my false security
mindless conformity
unGodly screams
shaken up
does awaken
this gentle spirit
a little help
Please!
I can't see here
bionic eyes bare
my secrets
reaching into deep pools
of water...
...
...
fall
ing
into a sensuality
awoken
in desire

Sunday, July 22, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: heart love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 09 December 2018

Leaves one breathless. A Masterpiece.

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Gio Masserati 19 December 2018

Thanks Sandra! Breathe! Lol! Appreciate the sentiment....a breathless Masterpiece! I accept your dear assessment. So kind-Gio

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Robert Murray Smith 22 July 2018

Too many cliches. Rewrite as it has potential.

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Gio Masserati 22 July 2018

my love is cliché... though I am banking that love's potential, in all His Glory, takes me, Just as I Am.

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 July 2018

nice writing style nicely penned

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Gio Masserati 22 July 2018

Thank you!

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