Sunday, May 7, 2006

From Where I Sit Comments

Rating: 5.0

Through eighteen glass sqaures
lined with lead-
The outside world
A spiders view.
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Duncan Wyllie 07 May 2006

Much talent, enjoyed the flow and felt myself placed in medieval times, a stately manner Full of intrigue and atmosphere Love Duncan

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Julia Klimenova 07 May 2006

I love the mounting tension in this poem. The silence grows until it becomes unbearable and bursts. There is always a sense of danger when everything is too quiet in our concrete jungle.

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