Funeral Of Century(2)
LOL. I hope my english will be better than in (1) .
East coast, Tsunami rushed like wolves
Cloudburst was the flag, then
here the ceremony of funeral started
Holy water to wash all sin was the flood
To clean the evil in past
and share the guitly in future
Righteous were willing to die for salvation
but the Lord lost his patience
Curse falled down with rain to the world
Ancient Civilization, To be buryed or submerged
To be baptized the world
Cry and cry, scream again scream
No Noah's Ark to be found
East coast, people still intoxicated
Resentment, To feed the demon stronger
The ghostes drunk like a fish
with the heavy punch smashed they run away
Puppets still not noticed the dangerous
Condor wheeled in the air above the upcoming food
Shrug, dreariness as well as dismal
The magic song flew from faraway -
for last time of the earth
for last time of the day
Ancient Civilization, To be buryed or submerged
To be baptized the world
Cry and cry, scream again scream
No Noah's Ark to be found
My dearest Poet Tsunamy is not a mystery, Here In India East Coast Velakkanni, a well known Church, when prayer is going on, killer waves washed almost all in there.....
Your English is not bad at all! It is really good for a native of China where English is hardly spoken! The poem is indeed great! With Tsunami, literally we witnessed the greatest funeral of the century! How many millions got 'baptized' in the cloud burst and titanic waves that came like wolves! Its horror and magnitude are beautifully expressed! Thank you Xiao for reading my poem and for the comment!
thanks very much! your words means a lot to me. I will keep going on English poem. thanks very much! your poem is very nice, and I hope I can translate them in Chinese one day.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Funeral of Century-The title and the body of the poem, both are great in capturing the horror and destruction of Tsunami.A full mark of ten.