aron blesch


Games - Poem by aron blesch

''How can you say that? ''
''What do you mean? ''

''You know what I mean.''
''No, I don't.''

''You're insenstive.''
''And you're critical.''

''No, I'm not.''
''Yes, you are.''

''Shut up! ''
''Let me kiss you.''


Comments about Games by aron blesch

  • (3/7/2018 1:05:00 AM)

    Great poem. I really like the ending, how you tie it all in. (Report)Reply

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  • (4/22/2007 12:52:00 PM)

    Sounds like common miscommunication between couples. Everybody wants to have the last word. Maybe a kiss can correct all that. You put it really nicely, I like it!

    CeCe
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  • (3/22/2007 5:56:00 PM)

    Real communication and the correct use for lips (Report)Reply

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  • Rajaram Ramachandran (3/21/2007 10:57:00 PM)

    What a shock at the end of the poem! (Report)Reply

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  • Charles M Moore (3/21/2007 7:46:00 PM)

    Like the idea of this, The ending is perfect, and a wonderful way to shut someone up. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/21/2007 7:32:00 PM)

    This gave me a giggle... interesting style you have...

    Alison
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 15, 2007

Poem Edited: Wednesday, February 2, 2011


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