Tiku akp


Gasp - Poem by Tiku akp

You reveal a beauty
Unblemished, so pure;
In your nakedness getting
Soaked in a steady downpour;

You feel so good when
In your heaving bosom;
I bury my head and you hold
Me tight with a love so strong;

I kiss you in passion
My hold on you gets bold,
You let me live inside you deep
As a heat rises in us in the cold.

@ Anil Kumar Panda 29/10/2015

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about Gasp by Tiku akp

  • Sanjukta Nag (10/29/2015 8:45:00 AM)


    A passionate side of love expressed with great intensity. And yes heat is rising from the poem. Beautiful. (Report) Reply

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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (10/29/2015 7:39:00 AM)


    erotic sense in romance. revealing beauty.. very nice poem thank you very much (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (10/29/2015 7:37:00 AM)


    Passionate poem, Good write....10 (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/29/2015 7:27:00 AM)


    Revealing a beauty is fantastically interesting in sharing of gossiping. Wise sharing definitely...10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 29, 2015



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