Sunday, July 21, 2013

A Country Girl In Love

Rating: 4.8
You don’t have to go to the dale
To find her playing with a butterfly;
She would hide from you
As she is young and shy;

You can’t see her among trees and bushes
For she does not stay in a place;
Just track down her in fields
On her head she has done a new lace;

She may be on the hill, sitting on stone
And staring at the sky in a pensive mood;
She has been going there to watch
The flitting clouds since her childhood;

Yonder at the edge of dale you can see
Her squatting by the river side playing;
With sands, snails and pebbles
Watching the boats as they go down gliding;

Sometimes I watch her lithely tread
The narrow paths across the desolate field;
Her eyes looking for someone
Where the green crops wild flowers yield;

She is lost in herself and wanders through
Vales, forests, hills and hot desert;
Singing, dancing, laughing and murmuring
No one knows what is in her heart;

Sometimes they think she has met
Someone somewhere in those lonely lands;
Who fell in love with her and promised
To return and would ask her for her hands;
Anil Kumar Panda
me poet yeps poet 01 January 2021
your POPULARITYCURVE S VERY INTERESTING DID YOU COMPOSE THIS POEM WHILE reading it or recalling your nights in your mines hoping all were thine
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Khairul Ahsan 26 December 2020
Read this lovely poem again today, and got impressed as before. The poem rhymes well and draws an imagery that is clearly visible to the readers.
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Khairul Ahsan 30 October 2020
The poem is as simple as a happy country girl. The poetic imageries are wonderfully drawn and they appear live, as though!
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Suresh Kumar Ek 24 October 2020
This poem takes us Back to romantic ages Nice poem
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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 October 2020
A thrilling expression has been made on her and love with her along with Nature and nurture. The last stanza is much touching. Beautiful work. Five stars.
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Suresh Kumar Ek 18 October 2020
NICE POEM Takes the reader to Wordsworthian romantic sensations
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D Loveday Morris 17 July 2020
I got carried away reading is poem. Lovely.
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An outstanding poem with great imagery of a young maiden in tune with nature, waiting eagerly for her love. I loved the way you have unfolded the poem with the butterflies, trees, flowers, sands and pebbles. I can visualise the singing, dancing and beautifully weaved into this poem.....A full score of 10 Tiki ji
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Magadha Rani 19 December 2019
A beautiful poem sir. I liked it. thank you for sharing........10++++++++++++++
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Anil Kumar Panda 20 December 2019
Thanks for your encouraging words. Gratitude.
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Sankaran Ayya 03 November 2019
She is lost in herself and wanders through Vales, forests, hills and hot desert; Singing, dancing, laughing and murmuring No one knows what is in her heart; - - -beautiful lines remind me Wordsworth's Solitary Reaper!
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Anil Kumar Panda 03 November 2019
That is a very inspiring comment sir. I am glad you like the poem. My regards.
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