Tiku akp

A Country Girl In Love - Poem by Tiku akp

You don’t have to go to the dale
To find her playing with a butterfly;
She would hide from you
As she is young and shy;

You can’t see her among trees and bushes
For she does not stay in a place;
Just track down her in fields
On her head she has done a new lace;

She may be on the hill, sitting on stone
And staring at the sky in a pensive mood;
She has been going there to watch
The flitting clouds since her childhood;

Yonder at the edge of dale you can see
Her squatting by the river side playing;
With sands, snails and pebbles
Watching the boats as they go down gliding;

Sometimes I watch her lithely tread
The narrow paths across the desolate field;
Her eyes looking for someone
Where the green crops wild flowers yield;

She is lost in herself and wanders through
Vales, forests, hills and hot desert;
Singing, dancing, laughing and murmuring
No one knows what is in her heart;

Sometimes they think she has met
Someone somewhere in those lonely lands;
Who fell in love with her and promised
To return and would ask her for her hands;

Comments about A Country Girl In Love by Tiku akp

  • O Poet Me Poety (12/21/2017 2:17:00 AM)


    Anil Kumar Panda (12/21/2017 5:19:00 AM)

    Ok I know you very well. Thanks.

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  • (11/29/2017 5:35:00 AM)

    A lovely poem dear poet with scintillating poetic expression! I would love to quote some fascinating lines here, You can’t see her among trees and bushes/For she does not stay in a place/Just track down her in fields/On her head she has done a new lace'. Loved the piece of work! (Report) Reply

    Anil Kumar Panda (11/29/2017 9:39:00 AM)

    Thanks very much Sir for support. Appreciated.

  • (10/10/2017 11:58:00 AM)

    So beautifully expressed. really enjoyed reading this poem today. (Report) Reply

    Anil Kumar Panda (10/11/2017 10:16:00 AM)

    Feeling happy with your comment. Thanks very much.

  • Pratik Rajani (9/1/2017 1:24:00 PM)

    Great work..!
    Check out my poem SUN AND PLANET..
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    Anil Kumar Panda (10/11/2017 10:15:00 AM)

    I am glad you liked it. Thanks a lot. Yeah I am going to read your poem.

  • Raj Arumugam (8/27/2017 9:44:00 PM)

    beautiful nature imagery and message, Tiku... (Report) Reply

    Anil Kumar Panda (8/28/2017 6:59:00 AM)

    Great to receive a comment from you Sir. Honored. Thanks very much Sir.

  • Anzelyne Shideshe (7/20/2017 11:44:00 AM)

    Great piece, I enjoyed the imagery.keep on. (Report) Reply

    Anil Kumar Panda (8/28/2017 6:58:00 AM)

    I am glad you liked this poem. My hearty thanks.

  • (6/30/2017 9:31:00 AM)

    spellbinding. It is enigmatic. (Report) Reply

    Anil Kumar Panda (8/28/2017 6:57:00 AM)

    Thanks very much for reading and comment Sir. Regards.

  • The Poet Poet (6/15/2017 12:35:00 PM)

    Such lovely imagery can be conceived b a lover only she flies away like a butterfly you say it may be warm in the month of May she dashes to the deserts feels deserted maybe to the top mountains awaiting a her a hermit maybe she is going around in circles only poverty is her ordained gift could be she s in everlasting search of a lover only who would be enchanted by her beauty only maybe If you were also in love with her she'd accept you lovingly confusion of mind a gal does find guys running only for one thing sad no love can anyone define she is a lovely gold mine may be she one day becomes thine (Report) Reply

    The Poet Poet (6/16/2017 1:05:00 PM)


    Anil Kumar Panda (6/16/2017 7:45:00 AM)

    Glad that you liked it. thanks very much for taking time to read and lovely comment. Gratitude.

  • Stuart Munro (5/15/2017 4:41:00 AM)

    Love this poem beautiful writing (Report) Reply

    Anil Kumar Panda (6/16/2017 7:44:00 AM)

    Honored. Thanks for reading and comment Sir.

  • C. P. Sharma (4/25/2017 11:13:00 PM)

    Beautiful, it reads like 'Solitary Reaper'. (Report) Reply

    Anil Kumar Panda (6/16/2017 7:44:00 AM)

    Thank you Sir. My regards.

  • Nanda Kishore (3/17/2017 12:33:00 PM)

    Sometimes they think she has met
    Someone somewhere in those lonely lands;
    Who fell in love with her and promised
    To return and would ask her for her hands

    Did the country girl get her lover? Really magnificent poem
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    Anil Kumar Panda (3/18/2017 9:59:00 AM)

    Hi brother! ! Thanks for reading and giving wonderful comment.

  • Sylva-onyema Uba (2/27/2017 1:04:00 AM)

    A poem exploring love
    A desire and longing to love.

    Nicely written and communicated.

    Sylva-Onyema Uba
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    Anil Kumar Panda (3/18/2017 9:57:00 AM)

    Nice to know that you liked it.My regards.

  • Kenneth Maswabi (2/15/2017 2:24:00 AM)

    A Country Girl in Love
    A lovely poem with a tinge of sadness. She is yearning for Love...but is it real or imaginary? is she lost? may someone find her...and fulfill her desires. Thanks. (Report) Reply

    Anil Kumar Panda (2/15/2017 5:44:00 AM)

    Yeah you are right. the actual meeting has been kept a suspense for the reader to guess. thanks for reading and giving comment.

  • Chinedu Dike (2/8/2017 8:25:00 PM)

    Piece of elegance with rendition of words to utmost justice. Lovely poem written beautiful rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

    Anil Kumar Panda (2/9/2017 6:13:00 AM)

    I am glad you liked it and thanks for nice comment.

  • Elora Leanor (1/2/2017 12:13:00 AM)

    True Love
    Waiting... a very nice theme! Girl in love with her beau and waiting for him to come back... (Report) Reply

  • Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh (12/4/2016 6:50:00 AM)

    A nicely worded version of a country girl which gives an invaluable sight in my mind.Well done Anilji. (Report) Reply

  • Baharak Barzin (11/15/2016 10:40:00 AM)

    Lovely poem you showed a pure love so great (Report) Reply

    Anil Kumar Panda (11/15/2016 9:19:00 PM)

    Thanks very much for taking time to read and comment. Much love.

  • Diane Montemayor (10/27/2016 8:39:00 AM)

    Dear Sir Anil,

    Lovely poem...it paints thousand words to describe the feelings of being inlove.
    Thanks for sharing....memories, uh memories of the past...

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    Anil Kumar Panda (10/27/2016 10:00:00 AM)

    Thanks Diane for taking time to read and giving comment. Appreciated.

  • Atasha Williams (10/10/2016 9:11:00 AM)

    Awwwww. this is a lovely breathtaking poem, I can see an feel each word. Excellent work! Big 10! (Report) Reply

    Anil Kumar Panda (10/11/2016 3:03:00 AM)

    Thanks very much Atasha! ! Thanks for lovely comment.

  • Rebecca Navarre (10/5/2016 11:18:00 PM)

    This poem just stole my Heart! ! ! I'm speachless and swept away by its Deeply Moving Beauty! ! !
    Thank You so dearly for sharing! ! ! ! ! ! 10+++++++++
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    Anil Kumar Panda (10/6/2016 11:42:00 AM)

    Hi Rebecca.... I am glad that you liked the poem. Thanks very much for taking time to read and giving comment. Much love.

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 21, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, July 22, 2013

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