Gate 53 Poem by Poetheart Morgan

Gate 53

Rating: 5.0


Gate 53 now is closed

all tickets for sale
is now past

the man said!
perpendicular, she sit on the bench alone

a paper in her hands
waiting for the next departure

transversely, she wants

run into the Southern Cross
throughout her solitude that’s fit well

horizontally he arrives
silent, as if it were human
aren’t steel’s friction steps
but she knows are railways to go

malicious engineering
long curves …
~She, vertical ~He, erect~

From afar, you can see
crumpled paper at the train station 53

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
end, love, friction, longing, meeting, railways, train station
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fatima Nusairat 14 May 2013

Nice poem, , Poetheart (going) , , come and visit my page

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Ace Of Black Hearts 14 May 2013

Oh dear I wonder what that crumbled paper said, such a beautiful love poem of curiosity.

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Poetheart Morgan 16 May 2013

Dear Shahzia, then explain to me poetess! Because I'm not so sure about my poems!

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Unwritten Soul 16 May 2013

Just enjoyed the trip in every station...we learned lot of thing in each station from 0 -53...be in railway always okay..so in life...53 just the year of you will go but no train moves so brave like you...so ignore things and move forward.._Soul

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Shahzia Batool 16 May 2013

poetry stays as just simple nursery-rhyme if presented without symbolism...your symbols are quite obvious! ! !

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Poetheart Morgan 15 May 2013

Dear Altair, you are right, is about maturity and how many gates i had to cross. I want to go home! !

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Poetheart Morgan 14 May 2013

Hello Dear Ace of Black Hearts! ! ! what was written on that paper changed her whole history! ! What a perception poet!

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