I met a gentleman tonight
and he introduced himself to me
meek and quiet
wants nothing of me
and told me so suddenly
Only two sips madam! !
as I did not know him
I drank three sips
and he, who came from as far
and who that was so beloved
told me
when you write
write in the wind from 11 am.
because the wind that hitting you the night
invades and disturbs you
then do not drink of my love
before the trees sounding the 12 hours
Dont be sad! And hang on!
I am here not to comfort you but to explain
how great is my love for you
and bigger is my solitude for you drink to me
Dont drink me!
Dont love me!
Hear that morning was made for you
simple and honest
Just dont love me
but let me love you at the end!
I love this new write, very nice! ! once i heard something Dont drink me said something from tea cup hahaha joking_Soul
an intriguing poem. i had a bit of trouble. perhaps english is not your 'first' language? ? i'm not sure. maybe it is my 'fault' i don't understand some of this. i don't agree with some of the structure/wording. but i am pretty darn sure there is a mistake in the line: wants nothing to me.......How would it sound to you as nothing OF me? just a typo perhaps. i especially liked: write in the wind from 11 am because the wind that hitting you the night invades and disturbs you and: Only two sips madam! ! as I did not know you I drank three sips...................i like it though i do not understand it. what does the following mean i wonder: before the trees sounding the 12 hours thanks for sharing.
fabulous and nicely penned.love should be bilateral.the one who slants is a true lover. ~nb
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A marvelous presentation Good work