May the passion arise
When i love and praise thee
May my awaiting eyes
Shine on your way to me
May my promising heart
Turn your doubts away
May my last blast
Kill your uncertainty
May my stillborn love
Awake your lean soul
when i wait for in love it shines and through the shining way my lover will come and step in, into my heart..... lovely poem dear poetess - tony
MAY MY STILLBORN HEART / AWAKE YOUR LEAN SOUL - That couplet is worth many complete poems which amble on and on without achieving total realization. There IS total realization in this couplet. I can sense in it the past when both persons were unfulfilled but patiently awaiting the True Lover, and also I sense the future when the beloved's lean soul will swell with the enrichment of love and the lover's life will be fully born in the experience of love. In SUFI terms the lover could be God, the beloved a human soul, or vice versa (?) , or this could be a praise-song of love between two humans. Or both (!) . However we read it, you have shown how necessary the experience of love is to fulfill our human nature, indeed to transform it into something higher which summons us. This poem has taken up residence in my heart for sure.
May my stillborn love Awake your lean soul indeed wow you have got some real good poem thanks for sharing so i could read a few if not all
a Promise with Passion and Certainty.. Thanks for sharing 10+++
a Promise from Passion and certainty.. Thanks for sharing! 10++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Such a sweet poem on love and passion. Thanks for sharing.