John Thorkild Ellison

Rookie - 113 Points (17/04/51 / Edinburgh)

Girl In A Bar - Poem by John Thorkild Ellison

You're so uncool
But I don't care,
Don't like cool girls....

You're no-one's fool,
You got those curls
And ringlets in your hair.

You sure ain't hip,
(Perhaps you're square!)
But I don't care,

You got those curls....

Come home with me,
We'll have some fun,
I'll shoot my gun,
And you can be my only one.


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  • (8/30/2008 5:27:00 AM)


    John I must say I am slowly becoming a fan of your poetry. Poetry with humour like yours is rare. Definately a treasure. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 21, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, March 22, 2011


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