An Alien's Valentine Poem by John Thorkild Ellison

An Alien's Valentine

Rating: 2.8


Come be my Valentine
And make me dance with joy;
I'll give you babies, one, two, three,
A girl, an alien, and a boy.

Don't be so very nervous!
Relax, unwind, be cool!
With an IQ like an asteroid
I'm hardly your average fool.

You may think me presumptuous
But I haven't yet begun,
My astronomical fantasies
Are sexy and they're fun.

So be my Valentine
And make me dance with joy,
The stars are advantageous,
Come on now, don't be coy!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Moya Levy 09 January 2006

I'm enjoying reading your poems John, this one especially! ! Moyaxx

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David Desantis 15 May 2008

haha cool man. Very fun as greenwolf said...the rhyme scheme was also excellent, and I love how you fit in the baby alien mention...slightly quirky as i think all good poetry should be lol 10/10

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Greenwolfe 1962 23 February 2008

Well done, my man. Fun, the way poetry should be. GW62

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Chuck Audette 06 October 2006

Would that be an illegal or legal alien? Very fun! - chuck

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Esther Leclerc 06 October 2006

Mondo-bizarro fun, John! Let's see whatcha got for Halloween! ! ! Esther : ]

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Preeti - is here! 27 July 2006

That was quite interesting! Preets

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