Give Me The Grain As The Pot Roll Down Poem by Antonio Liao

Give Me The Grain As The Pot Roll Down

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sweat that sweeten the wheat, touches the tongue that
sweeten the grain, brings flesh as it boils the potter hot in
the lapped hand it stops

shape and turn into some direction, whether soft or hard
too sharp to touch, comes the most beautiful mold as it
form the most splendid return the eyes have seen

as little fingers linger folded the clay in the water soak
it display; waste no bits and pieces, paste what ever it
may see, putting in the ground for making it dry in the
air it say goodbye

here is my flexible hand and softly touches your whist
line for you to feel the shape you want me to be, roll my
side, to up and down, as the wheat stand in the ground
waiting for you to calm down

pour me down for me to give the ground as you will have
the grains, in you’re sweetening tongue you found.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tamara - Hanaring 14 September 2009

wonderfulllllllllllllllllllllllll..sweet and passionated poem..loved this creative images... shape and turn into some direction, whether soft or hard too sharp to touch, comes the most beautiful mold as it form the most splendid return the eyes have seen as little fingers linger folded the clay in the water soak it display; waste no bits and pieces, paste what ever it may see, putting in the ground for making it dry in the air it say goodbye here is my flexible hand and softly touches your whist line for you to feel the shape you want me to be, roll my side, to up and down, as the wheat stand in the ground waiting for you to calm down pour me down for me to give the ground as you will have the grains, in you’re sweetening tongue you found.....

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