A Cup Of Wine Poem by Antonio Liao

A Cup Of Wine

Rating: 5.0

lips that touch, the ground of a cup
that tastes that nods on
a wonder that was never
there before

like a solitude, of desires
takes the bitter
or the better
that ends, with a look that
sees no one

in the closeness of the
dawn, the hop that gallops
makes one refresh
perhaps a little pop
of what is life

in a burden, have a little

Estrella Baldemosa 30 June 2008

a touch of carnal pleasure from the bitter and better taste of wine...good penning.

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Kesav Easwaran 21 August 2008

good puff over a cup of tasty wine, Anto...philosophy in sweetness...good write 10

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Tsira Goge 23 September 2008

...As smiling Dionysos... 10... Tsira

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Shimon Weinroth 30 October 2008

the wonderous ways to enhance and escape harsh realities, perhaps the title should be a cup of wine and- is step with the Dionysos 10

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This poem is like the title itself, Fine wine, Enjoyed the read, had a little puff! ; D

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Rinki Nandy 26 January 2010

you words make a cup of wine pleasurable and enticing, imgaination knows no bounds.10+

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 12 December 2009

Indeed interesting… Ms. Nivedita UK

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Obinna Eruchie 13 August 2009

Interesting rich words to taste a cup of wine.

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Fluent, mellifluous and delicious like a cup of red wine.10.

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