Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 700,065 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Give Them Smile - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

I find many faces
Riddled with worrisome traces
Always burdened with tension
Not one or two cases can be mentioned

Life is mechanical
Happiness is never found even on arrival
It lacks real essence of joy
There is nothing much to enjoy

Such kinds of people are not stone
But something wrong has gone
They are made slave of circumstances
Only they need opportunity or chance

I would love to give them smile
From me by simple name
“Take it free by no compulsion”
But smile with no more confusion

This may give them some room
To remove all their gloom
It may bring back good shine
The nature may feel fine


Comments about Give Them Smile by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/2/2013 11:28:00 PM)

    Smile and lift someone's sagging spirits!


    Philo FrancisLess than a minute ago
    Smile and light up the world..Smile and brighten someone's life!
    TQ for an amazing write!
    Comment 0
    very nice flow and rhyming...
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/2/2013 11:28:00 PM)

    Joan Pacinabo a.k.a. Wu Lang5 minutes ago
    well done!
    Comment 0
    good
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/2/2013 11:27:00 PM)

    Anna Laurencio6 minutes ago
    good

    I would love to give them smile
    From me by simple name
    “Take it free by no compulsion”
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/2/2013 11:27:00 PM)

    Not one or two cases can be mentioned WHAT DOES THE POET INTEND TO SAY HERE?


    Edward Wahbe5 minutes ago
    I would love to give them smile
    From me by simple name
    “Take it free by no compulsion”
    But smile with no more confusion

    This may give them some room THE POET OFFERS KIND WORDS OF CONSOLATION
    To remove all their gloom
    It may bring back good shine
    The nature may feel fine
    Comment +1
    inspirational
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/2/2013 11:26:00 PM)

    Connie Matthews Horinek1 minute ago
    I liked it
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/2/2013 9:10:00 AM)

    I find many faces
    Riddled with worrisome traces
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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 2, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, December 2, 2013


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