Given Up On You! ! Poem by Brandi Knecht
Given Up On You! !
Look at this,
Look at what you did to me.
You said you loved me,
You said you needed me,
but it was all pretend.
I know now what I didn't know before,
you always lied,
you always cheated,
you even had a chick on the side.
I dont know why I even try.
I try to keep it up,
but you know what!
I've given up! !
Brandi, this piece personifies frustration... evident from beginning to end. Great write! ! Brian
Woah woah woah! ! ! Not feeling this whole 'anti-guy' thing here! ! ! : P Some of us are ok! *pouts* Honestly pet, you sound like you're better off without this guy. It sounds a deep relationship, but on your part only. It's impressive, though, that you can express your feelings on it. Liking it a lot. Dan x x x
Boys are so stupid! i'm sorry about you ex (i'm guessing? ?) but yeah, boys are so retarded, they don't know what they have untill they dont have it anymore!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/16/2024 12:08:33 AM # 1.0.0.1119
im really feeling this poem its great as it explores lots of true feeling most may feel your good at this so keep it up ;)