Brandi Knecht

Rookie (2-23-89 / Washington)

Given Up On You! ! - Poem by Brandi Knecht

Look at this,
Look at what you did to me.

You said you loved me,
You said you needed me,
but it was all pretend.

I know now what I didn't know before,
you always lied,
you always cheated,
you even had a chick on the side.
I dont know why I even try.

I try to keep it up,
but you know what!
I've given up! !

Comments about Given Up On You! ! by Brandi Knecht

  • Selcan Deniz (12/14/2006 11:26:00 AM)

    im really feeling this poem its great as it explores lots of true feeling most may feel your good at this so keep it up ;) (Report)Reply

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  • Brian DornBrian Dorn (12/7/2006 2:23:00 PM)

    Brandi, this piece personifies frustration... evident from beginning to end. Great write! !

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  • Dan Brown (11/25/2006 5:48:00 PM)

    Woah woah woah! ! !
    Not feeling this whole 'anti-guy' thing here! ! ! : P

    Some of us are ok! *pouts*

    Honestly pet, you sound like you're better off without this guy. It sounds a deep relationship, but on your part only.

    It's impressive, though, that you can express your feelings on it.
    Liking it a lot.

    Dan x x x

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  • Brittney Hayner (11/15/2006 1:40:00 PM)

    Boys are so stupid! i'm sorry about you ex (i'm guessing? ?)
    but yeah, boys are so retarded, they don't know what they have untill they dont have it anymore!

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 14, 2006

Poem Edited: Friday, November 12, 2010

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