Monday, August 6, 2012

Gloomy Autumn Comments

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Amber colors... leaves portray
People converge on the park each day
Running, walking, laughing, talking
Playing children... mad dogs barking
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Singleton M. Tate
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Indranil Bhaduri 16 August 2012

Beautifully rhymed. Loved the job.

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Saadat Tahir 07 August 2012

whoa...great rhyme and meter... high on context content and poetic merit i loved the way you said it....superb i guess we have a kinda common style, that's why it touched a cord cheers :)

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