Amber colors... leaves portray
People converge on the park each day
Running, walking, laughing, talking
Playing children... mad dogs barking
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whoa...great rhyme and meter... high on context content and poetic merit i loved the way you said it....superb i guess we have a kinda common style, that's why it touched a cord cheers :)
Beautifully rhymed. Loved the job.