from "While Passing Through"/Summer
Glow worm pulse of light
under sky immense with stars.
A lantern's put out.
A lantern's put out Glen, I enjoyed reading the third line which has an amazing twist, the essence of Haiku. Incredible Haiku, brilliantly crafted! Big 10.
Thanks, Irfanulla. This started with me thinking about the significance of a single poem. -Glen
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Glow worm and stars.... comparing....... very fine.. you lead me to imagine the skies full of dancing glow worms. tony
hey, tony! thanks for reading and commenting and bringing my attention back to this haiku. as i'm guessing you know, when you've written hundreds of poems, you can forget ones that you wrote months ago. be blessed. -glen