Saturday, June 25, 2011

Glycerine Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am exposed.
I wish I'd known how fragile the heart was,
how soft the flesh was.
I wish,
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Dakota Ellerton
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 25 June 2011

Great poem. I loved the way you described the whole thing. The poem was written well with nice texture and imagery. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Best regards Akmal

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