God! please give me a break
Today the world is ruled by hate
If your world was made from love
Why was Lucifer brought upon us..
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God please give me a name
For long have I wandered in shame
Let the Muses sing for my sake
Till I die and lie in state..
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Christ please come to our aid
For how long shall we live in pain
Bring paradise to the world you create
As your kingdom, in faith we await.
Amen! Let's keep praying for His kingdom to be establish in the world. Great write!
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Nice poem Efe Title/intro: perfect Fovourite lines: Christ please come to our aid For how long shall we live in pain Bring paradise to the world you create As your kingdom, in faith we await. What to change: less to nothing Over all assessment: Well penned poem