Thursday, October 2, 2008

Gold Are Not Silver Comments

Rating: 5.0

dust has to return, night has a day
as the sky in the heaven, the night has fall into darkness

the air blown to the highest height, the wave return to the shore
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Antonio Liao
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Kesav Easwaran 05 October 2008

a very good write deeply philosophic and meaningful...the lines starting with 'moment is true...i liked most in this composition...good work, Anto 10

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Ency Bearis 02 October 2008

from ash we begin and to ash we will return..thats philosophical say.. you write and narrated in the same way..good job.. Ency Bearis

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