Goldie By Name Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Goldie By Name

Rating: 5.0


It is good for health to miss
To feel some thing short of kiss
But a nice feeling and belonging
It is how one should feel with nice beginning

I have always missed beautiful friends
They have brought joy and happiness till the end
Some of then have stayed for longer time
Some of them have left in between sometimes

Neither has it had to do anything with social standing
Nor with the attachment of secret understanding
It is the feeling within that makes person to miss
Always wish for progress in life with happiness

One of my female friends has lot more to do
She had some thing special to prove true
I compared her to that of 'Cuckoo' bird
As she had nice voice cord to be heard

I still tease her as goldie*
I sharpen attack by add her as an oldie
She is in fact gold mines
Rich in culture and language she clearly defines

Not all people can endure your senseless attack
But she is liberal and lays stress to attach
More on human qualities than anything as personal
This I consider as human asset than with any trouble

She has appetite for occasional poetry
I go on large way with full flow from battery
I don't know how far I may survive in this race
Yet I have lot more to reveal than to hide on face

Lucky people are those who have many or less friends
One should long for large contacts with conceptual trend
It may help to know the mind of people living very far
As we see wide sky with twinkling small stars

I sum up by saying simple word
I miss all and wish to look forward
It may not become possible to meet them in person
But yes we all can feel good with very good reasons

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
* Goldie is just pet name
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 September 2012

Really beautiful poem Aadeesh Shastry6 minutes ago I loved reading this poem. Comment 0 the wording is good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 September 2012

Alexander Braun1 minute ago the wording is good but the multiple grammar mistakes make it very difficult to understand. if you can iron out the grammatical errors then this will be a really great poem, good job.

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hank you oldy for the poem u made for me.thank u so much... Deletejadia4708au Naidz Ladia i dont know how to say thanks for this poem oldy..but prior to all, i like it very much..i had made a response poem already, but when i look again, it was gone...i donklnow what happen but maybe there is a problem in facebook....i'll make another later...3 hours ago · Unlike · 1 Deletejadia4708au Naidz Ladia thanks oldy

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It is good for health to miss To feel some thing short of kiss But a nice feeling and belonging It is how one should feel with nice beginning

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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