Sunday, June 17, 2012

Good Intentions Comments

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The impermance of salvation,
begins to bleed at the imperfect seems of dilusion.
I beg involuntarily as my body shakes and strokes.
I once believed in faith,
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Dakota Ellerton
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Hans Vr 06 July 2012

We can give up the perversion but please keep the good intentions I think this is a strong poem critical of unreasonalbe dogma and rituals. Too many people, in trying to do away with the clutter throw also away the essentials. I wish more could keep spirituality and good intention alive Very thorught provoking poem.

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